Why do I find myself wandering these haunted fields,
Following a shadow of a spirit...
Pulled by the barbed wire wrapped around my throat,
and the poison threatening my blood....
Desperate glances behind, remind me,
that I can't help the way I feel...
But why do I find my self confessing my heart's true song,
To a moon that will never hear...
Here I am, my knees bloodied and torn in the dried, tarnished straw,
I can only imagine the luscious taste of sweet moon's light...
But here I am, bound by my love, bound for all eternity,
my love for those who cannot return it to me...
I will never find my way,
out of these haunted fields of indigo.
comments please, alot of symbolism and alot of imagery <3
xD Love all the imagery! Truly a beautiful piece. xD I have to say, one of my favorites of all of your works ^^
This is a hauntingly beautiful poem! I love your symbolism, and the descriptions are very nice. Your flow is good too, and it's well-written overall. Excellent work!
wow its like a never endng serit traped in his own world scrapeing 4 freedumn gasping 4 air never ending pain thirsting 2 escape almost like the world as i c it its so beautyfull
Very inspiring writing
iconfullmoon: a beautiful piece.
There was alot of symbolism and imagery....but not enough Game though