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Why do I find myself wandering these haunted fields,
Following a shadow of a spirit...

Pulled by the barbed wire wrapped around my throat,
and the poison threatening my blood....

Desperate glances behind, remind me,
that I can't help the way I feel...

But why do I find my self confessing my heart's true song,
To a moon that will never hear...

Here I am, my knees bloodied and torn in the dried, tarnished straw,
I can only imagine the luscious taste of sweet moon's light...

But here I am, bound by my love, bound for all eternity,
my love for those who cannot return it to me...

I will never find my way,
out of these haunted fields of indigo.
comments please, alot of symbolism and alot of imagery <3
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Kailani-e Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
xD Love all the imagery! Truly a beautiful piece. xD I have to say, one of my favorites of all of your works ^^
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topazcat511 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
hehe, why thank you ^_^
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Kailani-e Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Your welcome :D
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BelaRoseWolf Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Student Writer
This is a hauntingly beautiful poem! :D I love your symbolism, and the descriptions are very nice. Your flow is good too, and it's well-written overall. Excellent work!
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topazcat511 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
aw thanks ^_^ I worked really hard on this one
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BelaRoseWolf Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Student Writer
You're welcome! ^^ I could tell!
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candygirl101010 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
wow its like a never endng serit traped in his own world scrapeing 4 freedumn gasping 4 air never ending pain thirsting 2 escape almost like the world as i c it its so beautyfull
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topazcat511 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:hug: thanks
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candygirl101010 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
haha np
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Heart4Art23 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Very inspiring writing :D
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