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Sometimes I think I need to wear a label,
A sticker,
A collar,
A tag…

That will tell you what is wrong with me…

"Hi, My Name Is:
Easily loving, falls to quickly, doesn't know when to stop, tries her best but can't succeed, and only wants to hold someone's hand… to feel that hand on her shoulder when she cries…"

The ink would be smudged across as if written in haste, a couple letters bolded in spots as if trying to fix a mistake…So many mistakes…

The edges would be peeling as if to forget I ever existed all together…
Sometimes, I think I need to wear a warning…

So you will know ahead of time that I'm too broken to repair…too lost to be found…too hurt to heal… and pretend to smile, often….

So that when you don't like what you read, I can just tear it away, and write another…

But no matter what I try, my name is always the same….
Whatever, it was really just something stuck in my head for a while :/ comments appreciated
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candygirl101010 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
gasp this is truly sad but beautyfull i love it it reminds me of me it makes me think of a mask i where and it makes me sad because i no some people get frightened about how i act truly and very few can b around me and thats because they are like me but unfortinatly that number is limited so i hide who i am and where a mask make a new labke then when im alone i can relax and be me im afraid 2 show me because i dont want them 2 c me and i dont want them 2 hate me or feer me i still love this piece though
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topazcat511 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
oh wow...then you really understand me then ;)
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candygirl101010 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
haha i guess so lol
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Kailani-e Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
: ) This is a beautiful little poem. :hug:
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topazcat511 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you thank you ;)
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Kailani-e Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Your welcome!
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DevlinTheBlack Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2012
I wear a collar...it has a Batman dog tag on it :o
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topazcat511 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
ah, dork knight, what would I do without you ;)
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DevlinTheBlack Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012
Sing the songs of Riley? o.O
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topazcat511 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
ummmm....no, definitely not xD
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