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Rusted daggers flung from their tongues,
Deep, infected scars reopened,
Tear away the skin above my breast,
And witness my heart's weak thrum.

You, you have made it so,
You poisoned it with your truthful tonic,
Your tampered quotes and encrypted sneers,
Do not twine the needle deeper,
Fling your hair through the seeping blood,
Paint the canvas of my years,

Falling from the chasm's edge,
Releasing my mind from the bitter nightmare,
I watch the sun comb its way through the trees,
And struggle to stand against the bars of home,

My hands and feet chained, a dusty cloth between my teeth,
I wait for the warden's glance,
That moment of fated chance,
Do not tempt me, mad suitor,
I am too heavy a burden for any soul.
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Rheatta99 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

o-o^

*Hits the follow button*

This just..

I had too hit that damn button..

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topazcat511 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh wow, thank you so much <3 I don't write much on this account anymore, and if I do, it's usually my more emotional works. I'm glad that you liked it that much <3
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candygirl101010 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
this is so beautyfull i love how soal renching it is
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topazcat511 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thanks <3
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candygirl101010 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
haha np
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SecretlyFading Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Student Writer
Edgy, brutal, and beautiful.

Your work always makes me smile~
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topazcat511 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you ^_^
I try my best to please :bow:
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tatterdema1ion Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Student General Artist
Oh what lovely, tormented imagery. I really like the edge you put in the narrator's voice-- it brought validity to the message of the poem. Great work.
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topazcat511 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thanks, that means alot :clap:
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lunaqueen17 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Student General Artist
I like!
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