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Forgive me if I intrude,
If I'm a little bold,
I've always been a little odd,
From all that I've been told…
But something about the way you smile,
Something about the way you trust,
Good Lord, send me a soul to love,
And forget this useless lust…
So many tiring hours spent,
Looking for his name…
Trying to find a hint,
If he's still the same…
I could have been the secret girl,
Chosen at a whim,
I threw my heart at his chest,
But still, I did choose him…
I don't know what is real anymore,
My mind does war against me,
Somehow I must get the patience,
To tame the visions that taint me.
So please forgive me if I'm odd,
My heart is just too hopeless to worry with,
But also because I am scared,
That true love is just a painted myth.
....if you get it, comment what you think, it would be appreciated in every way ;)
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Kalika-Shai Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012  Student General Artist
It's always scary to take that chance hoping it's true love while worrying it might not be real.
I believe it's real, but I might be biased since I believe I've found it.
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topazcat511 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
my fear is that because I'm looking for THE true love, I will be deceived and "the one" is not "the one" afterall...and my fantasies fall down the drain...
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Kalika-Shai Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012  Student General Artist
My advice is...don't look. Let it come. You will recognize it then.
I can't say how, but you will. You'll feel it and just..know. :)
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topazcat511 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thanks...I've known that answer for a while now, but the truth is, an absolute true romance is my heart's deepest desire....I thought I had it at one point...but though that was love, it wasn't "meant to be"...Now I'm just kind of stuck wondering if anyone is looking at me thinking the same...
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Kalika-Shai Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012  Student General Artist
I understand. And I've been there...I look back at what I had before what I have now and it doesn't even amount to half of the love I have now. The funny part is I didn't find it, it found me. When I stopping waiting for "the one" and just started doing things for me, there he was..right in front of me. So don't lose hope and have faith. You'll have it some day.
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topazcat511 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you :)
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DevlinTheBlack Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012
Makes me think of uncertainty...like hoping you could be the one while at the same...you're scared if you're not...I know that feeling
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topazcat511 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:hug: yep....exactly
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DevlinTheBlack Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012
I can't find tha damnn hug button...grrr...damn emoticons -_-
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topazcat511 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It's the thought that counts ;)
as well as it being this --> : hug :
but with the no spaces --> :hug:
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