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Have you ever burned an incense cone or wand,
And afterwords,
It's so light and only a fragile form of ash?
The slightest touch disintegrates it,
Sending it to fall down,
And becoming too much to clean…

I feel like that.

Have you ever broken a glass jar,
Just enough to see the shatter-lines,
But it still retains its shape?
The slightest touch will destroy it,
Causing it to release glimmering daggers,
Waiting to be stepped on for their revenge…

I feel like that.

Have you ever touched a frozen layer of water,
Tried to lift it from the bowl,
Tried to keep it from breaking it's original crystal form?
The slightest touch will erase your reflection,
And you will be left with two shards of melting depression,
That will freeze your blood, and scar your mentality…

I feel like that.

I'm just so tired of being fragile,
Of being close enough to the edge…
To look but never go down…
I'm just so tired of holding myself together…
All I want is for someone else to hold me…
And keep me from going insane…

There's a hole in my heart…
And I'm just so tired…
I feel like this.
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:icontsukixjun:
TsukixJun Nov 13, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
If I could fav it a million times I would!!!! It's really amazing!
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topazcat511 Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
aw thanks, it's been a while since I wrote this, I actually had forgotten I even had this to be honest :blush: thanks again ^^
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jeciwoods17 Sep 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Great comparisons!
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topazcat511 Sep 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you <3
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Kalika-Shai Sep 16, 2012  Student General Artist
You really provided great detail to express the emotion in a way everyone can understand and relate to. It's lovely. Sad, but lovely. :)
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topazcat511 Sep 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you, I worked hard on this one
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Kalika-Shai Sep 16, 2012  Student General Artist
I can tell. The hard work paid off. :]
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Kailani-e Sep 16, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Beautiful poem ... Its so hard sometimes, but in you is a core of gold. :hug:
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topazcat511 Sep 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
daawwwww :blushes:
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Kailani-e Sep 16, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
^^
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