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You… make me think of,
Soothing lavender-colored cloth,
Twinkling indigo, midnight skies,
The first taste of autumn in a warmed coffee cup,
Hazel scented steam twisting everywhere…
Fiery eyes of gold and dreams of silver hair,
A glinting smile, a smirk….

The softest touch,
And inked vines coiled across softer skin,
Sleeping lilies and koi fish across bronze tinted plates,
And the comforting hand, the reassuring gesture,
For fear of metallic insanity….

Peeking from behind silver scales,
Towering above like sharpened swords,
Smiling to myself,
I watch your careful eye,
The weight of your shoulder against mine,
That determined smirk, again,
And a new look of awe.

Have I brought that smile to your lips, my friend?
Am I the one that brought that beautiful treasure forth?
I follow, step around, and raise my eyes,
Looking away, I feel your steady hand on my back, once more….
Something tugs at my spirit,
And a shiver on my porcelain skin,
Please tell me I'm the one that made you smile, just this once…

Please, just don't ever let go,
Please, just don't let go,
Please, just don't go.
Please, don't go.
Don't go,
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Kailani-e Sep 25, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Awh! Beautiful!
topazcat511 Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thanks ^_^
Kailani-e Sep 26, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
^^ You're welcome
This is very beautiful, and completely non-cliche in so many glorious ways. Your imagery is really good, you write with a certain honesty and candour that makes this poem deep and satisfying to read. <3
topazcat511 Sep 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you, that means so much, you just don't know ^_^
and about the honesty part, its true, every single thing I write is based from how I'm feeling....or how I feel about someone in this case...but again, thank you :excited:
Don't worry, I know how lovely it feels when someone gives you a heartfelt reaction to your work :D It was beautiful. I did like your line about metallic insanity, it tastes nice when you say it out loud!
It's lovely to know you feel that way about someone :D
topazcat511 Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you so much ^_^
no worries, giving credit where it's due :D
DemonKubbi Sep 20, 2012  Student General Artist
awwwwwww omg i love it id never leave you
topazcat511 Sep 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:tighthug: I'm glad, it was really difficult for me to write
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