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Go ahead and tell me,
Your darkest deepest fear,
Whisper it, type it slow,
And never let them hear…
Because you know how much I care,
You know what I really mean,
And because I care so deeply,
You're secret's safe with me.

Go ahead and tell me,
Who you really love,
Whisper it, and type it slow,
And never let them know…
Because you know that I still care,
So I'll never tell you no,
I'll support your whims on hand,
And never to let go.

So go ahead and tie the string,
Draw the face of my true soul,
Tickle, laugh, and trick me, boy,
But you have to know,
That these games make it difficult,
They make it oh so hard…
I care for you,
And yet you're not sure..... who you care for…
And I can't let go…

I'll be here,
Waiting, smiling, laughing, and playing as always seen.
I'll be here,
Hoping, trusting, caring,  and  saying what I mean…

And you'll be there,
Swaying to and fro,
Never knowing who to love…
I'm your feline shadow, boy,
Remember, I can't let go…..
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:iconjamesakajamous:
jamesakajamous Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Student General Artist
Perfection great job
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topazcat511 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you so much ^_^
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Siren-Badru Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012  Student General Artist
This here is a piece of the soul, I've been here, on this side; but he didn't sway so much as he was beckoned away by himself and his fear of closeness to anyone. It was his love on loneliness that he swayed in.
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topazcat511 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I hear yah :/ I'm glad someone understands this feeling.
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Siren-Badru Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012  Student General Artist
=^0^=
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topazcat511 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
hehe ^_^
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Kalika-Shai Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Student General Artist
Aw. I have been there before...it's the worst.
But you captured it very well. Good job.
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topazcat511 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you ^_^ I'm glad you liked it
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Bubblestorm12 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That was beautiful.
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topazcat511 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:clap: thanks ^_^
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Sonaze100 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012
Oh jeez this made me shiver o.o awesome!
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topazcat511 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
hehe, I'm glad you liked it ^_^
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sumersela Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
this is.... awesome :D
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topazcat511 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
lol, I'm glad you liked it ;)
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Kailani-e Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
: ( Ah it sucks being stuck. Like a sunflower, ensnared by the sun and can never turn its head away from the sun in its unwavering loyalty. Or like a rose, in which you reach out to touch it, and find that your fingers are caught in its brambles. It hurts, but you can't let go as the claws dig into your skin, and you know it'll hurt more to tear your hand out of its deep thorns.
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topazcat511 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
love the imagery, beautiful comment <3 hehe ^_^ and thanks :hug: I needed that
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Kailani-e Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
You're welcome :hug: Its nice to know someone out there can understand me (to some degree) Thank you!
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topazcat511 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
lol, to some degree?! I loved your comment, and I guess that's the kind of girl I am really...a sunflower caught in the sun.....I might write something off that tonight...interesting....lol
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Kailani-e Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Haha! Can't wait to read it if you do! ^^
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TheSpitfireSpirit Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I've been this feline shadow...it sucks
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jamesakajamous Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Student General Artist
Agreed
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topazcat511 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
it truly does, doesn't it? and yet,...to quote my own :blush: "you can't let go"
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TheSpitfireSpirit Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Nope. I had this one guy that I was madly in love with for two whole years and I even told him...but he turned me down brutally every time and I should have hated him but I couldn't make myself walk away...ironically he's now dating a chick with the same name as me... *cough* Freudian slip *cough*
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topazcat511 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
haha, I like that ;) "Freudian slip" XD
I like this one guy, and he knows...but he just sees me as a super close friend to talk to about everything....which is okay, I mean, I want him to be happy....
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TheSpitfireSpirit Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I guess it's all about deciding what means more to you, his friendship and being there for him in the only way he'll accept you, or your own heart which breaks every day you aren't with him the way you wish you were...
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topazcat511 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
yeah...that's kinda where I'm at right now...we're such awesome friends though, because he trusts me with everything....I guess a good friendship is all I can be there for...he knows that I'm here if he needs someone...
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RabeaUmbra Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That was lovely :)
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topazcat511 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thanks ^_^
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